1. What's the point of typing things like 'ooh' or 'aaay'? Honestly, I thought there is no need to type it, since you already put that in hints section. 2. There's a typo in one 'worship'. 3. I'm pretty sure it should be 'SO you can sharpen your knife", "no SWEETER innocence", also "MY deathless death appears no sooner than in second part of the song.
By the way, in my opinion this is probably one of the worst songs ever made :) Although I have heard newer song from him on radio and that is even worse :)
He is probably one of the few world known Irish artists (Bono and Niall Horan as well) and his songs are great, Take Me To Church was the first song I learnt on the piano for fun and not just for an exam and it was definitely worth it