In the coal clue, it should say "To run properly, before his rebuild Henry needed special..." because he no longer needs it.
And you should specify that Knapford is the largest station in the TV series; because in the books, it was Tidmouth
these couple tweaks are all I can suggest. Otherwise, you did a good job.
In the coal clue, it should say "To run properly, before his rebuild Henry needed special..." because he no longer needs it.
And you should specify that Knapford is the largest station in the TV series; because in the books, it was Tidmouth
these couple tweaks are all I can suggest. Otherwise, you did a good job.