Amy Blyde #1: The Journey

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Amy Blyde #1: The Journey

Amy was home from school. It was wet and soggy. She didn't like wet and soggy. "How was school?" asked Amy's mom. Amy replied "Fine. I'm going to go for a walk in the park.". It was a 10-minute walk to Victory Park. Victory Park was one of the Jewel Parks. When Amy was walking, she could hear raindrops. At the park, she met one of her friends, Colette. Colette asked, "What's with that sad face, Amy?". "Nothing" Amy replied. "I'm going to hide behind the tree, okay?". "Okay," said Colette. People were always looking for Amy, but she didn't know why. Amy walked to the tree. She sat behind it. Suddenly, people dressed in spy clothes came to Victory Park. "We'll get Amy." one said. "And the Jewel," said the other. Amy thought Wait, the Jewel. They're trying to get the crown.  

Everyone in Tiornumantt City knew that all the Jewels put together made the crown. In the wrong hands, it could be dangerous. Amy tried to hide. "They've already found me," she said. "I'm too late,".

The spies got her. They put her into a wooden box. Everything went black.


SRQ:

Hard:

Lorelei

Harlow

Medium:

Fairy

Fire

Easy:

Orange

Green

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Level 28
Apr 15, 2021
Easy: Secondary colors
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Level 32
Apr 15, 2021
nope
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Level 38
Apr 15, 2021
Medium: Begin with F
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Level 32
Apr 15, 2021
nope
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Level 58
Apr 15, 2021
Story seems to rush and should have some compound descriptive sentences. Would enjoy a better plot. Just advice, good try though.
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Level 38
Apr 16, 2021
Easy is colours
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Level 32
Apr 16, 2021
yes