1. His name is spelled "Roggvir" not "Rogvir"
2. His name is spelled "Miraak" not "Mirrak"
3. Her name is "Vittoria Vici" not "Victoria Vici"
4. The dragon's name is spelled "Odahviing" not "Odaviing"
5. Their last names are "Mallory" not "Mellory"
6. Not important, but please fix some of your capitalization
1. His name is spelled "Roggvir" not "Rogvir"
2. His name is spelled "Miraak" not "Mirrak"
3. Her name is "Vittoria Vici" not "Victoria Vici"
4. The dragon's name is spelled "Odahviing" not "Odaviing"
5. Their last names are "Mallory" not "Mellory"
6. Not important, but please fix some of your capitalization