I have several problems with this one. In my accent China and Miner don't rhyme, and neither do Santa and Banter, Iron and Lion, or Loopy Rupee. And rail and fail are only one syllable, (see http://www.howmanysyllables.com/words/rail), although I will admit some of us US southerners can add extra syllables to just about any word. A hankie is not an American tissue. Hankie is short for handkerchief, which is made of cloth, not tissue paper. Kleenex, a brand name, is often our informal word for a tissue. Lastly, I couldn't figure out what you meant by "a person that murders night". To end on a positive note, I loved the cavern tavern.