A story I made... #1

So I have been making a story in my free time and I wanted to show it to you guys. Please let me know if you don't understand a part or find a mistake. This story is a bit repetitive in some parts and has lots of coincidences. Also know the chapters are pretty short and I will post every few days or so. I don't have a good name for this series so please let me know if you have an idea. This is my first blog so please let me know if it's a good one. I don't have much more to say, so here is the story.

Snowball fight

“Got you, Jake!” Kyle said as he made another snowball.

 It was a normal snow day, and they were playing dodgeball with snowballs. Noah, Jake, and Jordan were on one team, and on the other was Kyle, Miles, and Josh. It was the finals, Kyle vs. Noah. As they were about to throw the first wave of snowballs, Noah saw something black in the corner of his eye. 

“Wait,” he said surprisingly.

 “What’s the holdup?” Kyle replied impatiently. “I want to win this fight.”

 “I saw something black in the snow but it’s not there anymore,” Noah replied looking like something isn’t right.

 “Strange,” Miles said, “It might have just been you.” 

“I guess so too,” Noah said. 

When Kyle finally got Noah, they were about to go home until Jake shouted, “Where’s Josh?”

“What! he was just right he- “Miles said. Then he exclaimed, “OMG where is he?!”

Well, this is the end of the blog, I hoped you liked it!